Tiffany Said:

Nobody else would help me :(. Can you please help proof read my resume?

We Answered:

I agree it is too long. Under work experience you did a good job of starting each bullet with action verbs, but you've mixed past and present verbs
(example:
•Managing graduate students’ official files and documents
•Assisted the general managers in planning and organizing various restaurants on campus

Oh wait a minute you have two different jobs listed here ... you need to clean up the format. That whole section runs together as one.

Personally I think Objectives are dumb ... My objective is to get a job.

"Customer Service" Really??? A barista at Starbucks uses his/her "customer service skills to succeed in a competitive business environment". It seems like your skills and experiences are well beyond "customer service".

I might drop some of the international accomplishments or awards. Remember you can bring any of those up in your cover letter. "I have had many great opportunities to work with Asian dignitaries including was the First Secretary of the Consulate General of Japan in New York and the Thai Minister/Deputy Chief of Mission when I ..."

Of course if you are applying for a job in international banking or international non-profit I would say those things are important.

Good-luck

Nicole Said:

REALLY NEED YOUR HELP--Proof read my resume. Thank you so much.?

We Answered:

you have a masters of public administration and you're putting your resume on yahoo answers? Interesting.

Remember, this proof reading only goes so far bc 1/2 the resume is form, making sure everything is all on the same margin, you have it down to 1 page, etc.

Good luck!