Jack Said:

Can someone please check.shall my letter sounds OK. Please check spelling/grammatical mistake?

We Answered:

Oh, this really needs work. Do not go on and on about the awards you have won.. just say that you enjoy sports. Every new topic needs a new paragraph. I have corrected your grammar.

My name is Isse Said. I’m 19 years old, attending school at a local university. I’m interested in exploring combined experimental studies and gaining life experience, while broadening and backing up the skills I already have. I’m like the idea of working with people from different cultures. I am fluent in several languages and feel that volunteering will give me the experience needed to help me achieve my future goals.
In my spare time I enjoy volunteer work and leisure activities, such as cross country running. I have always been interested in long distance running and have taken part in a number of races.
In my six-form I volunteered at my school in the area of physical fitness. I also volunteered to take part in university sports day, from which I gained further experience.
I’m very interested in becoming a dental hygienist. In order to move towards this goal, I join in a work shadowing week at a heath hospital, in the dental department. I have also arranged another placement week myself at a local hospital, which was an opportunity to, once again, observe medical practice, from another point of view.